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The Rise of Scourge Scripting Information

Journal Entry: Sun Nov 4, 2012, 3:54 PM
So, after many hours of continuous typing I've finally gotten all the remaining 3 episodes of TRoS scripted! Huzzah! :squee:

BUT I know some of you hardcore Warriors fans will be a little pissed off at what I've done with the story. I'll write down the changes I've made (with as little spoilers as possible for those who haven't read the manga) along with the reasons for them.


:bulletred: The Henchcat has much more lines because I want him to be a comic releif  character instead of just a watershed character.

:bulletred: I've made BloodClan question Scourge's leadership after he shares his food with Socks and Ruby because it actually helps with the story a little.

:bulletred: I've given Socks a lot more lines to make up for the lack of lines he's had in the series so far X)

:bulletred: I've given Socks a character! :iconawesomefaceplz: Just to make him more interesting.

:bulletred: I've added a scene were Tigerstar and Scourge discuss their allegiance, which really helps with the story.

:bulletred: I've pretty much extended the last 4 pages of the manga into the whole of episode 6, which will last over 10 minutes.



That's as much as I want to give away. I didn't actually alter the story (too much), I just wanted to make it a little...better XP Because I felt that the whole second and third act of the story was really badly written and felt really rushed, not actually concentrating on anything other than Scourge's "evilness", and I want to elaborate on that. I hope you hardcore Warrior fans understand X)

  • Mood: Cheerful
  • Listening to: Coldplay songs
  • Reading: Sherlock Holmes: A Scandal in Bohemia
  • Watching: Higurashi No Naku Koro Ni
  • Playing: Slender
  • Eating: Oxygen, Nitrogen and C02
  • Drinking: Oxygen, Nitrogen and C02
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dragonOllie15 Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yay! Henchcat is to be the comic relief! And I shall do my VERY best!
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SuperSonicFireDragon Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Sounds good :) I always thought the end was a bit rushed in the manga.
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snakeshine Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this with your original plan of Brokenstar in The Rise of Scourge will be epic
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Danny-Senpai Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
its gonna be great! :D
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BlazingStarO Nov 4, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Hey, changes are good! Altering the story a bit makes it more interesting! :dummy: I look forward to seeing it. C:
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Urnam-BOT Nov 4, 2012  Student Digital Artist
haha, Socks! :iconawesomefaceplz:

oh, FINALLY someone who doesn't stick to the book! you made my day 03o the Scourge story has been the same through many animators and this will really give it a new twist to it =D
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Thesilverdragoness Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Good idea with the changes! I like them a lot, haha. ^^
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:iconpuppyhowler:
i think adding more to the story is a good thing, give your own creative touches you know
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:iconandress952:
I'm not mad at all! I love seeing something added! Can't wait, Blaze! :D
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Doctor-Flight Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
I think you've made reasonable fixes.
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